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  1. Taylor Hallman
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    Nice, tight story. I liked the culminating flashback. There is one small problem. She takes off her shoes in the beginning of the story and puts them in the backseat of the car, then when at the clearing she takes off her shoes. Other than that… keep on writing!

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  2. Nicci Haydon
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    Hi both, I’m really honored that you enjoyed the story enough to be annoyed by the apparent inconsistency. Guy, you’re right, the scenes run in reverse!

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