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  1. violetonlineisonline
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    The end!!!
    You’ve left me hanging for me…

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    1. niccihaydon
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      Haha, flash fiction is a bit like that, isn’t it? A taste, a scene, a single moment from a lifelong story.

      To me, this mini story has run its course. Helena has managed to bring out Gregory’s inner animal, which was her objective from the start. That said, it does leave you kind of hanging. Yes, I assume that they spent the night together, but what happened after that? What were things like at work the next day? The next week?

      There’s potential with these two characters for a longer romance.

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